inequity

 


inequity 

estefaaano_writes 

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a crushing weight, suffocating,

wounds festering in the dark corners of society.


screams swallowed by indifference.


our world, 

now a funhouse mirror of broken promises.


justice,

now a tattered flag in the wind.


the weak trampled underfoot,

while the mighty build their thrones on broken backs.


hope withers on the vine, 

dreams turn to ash.


we search for light,

but find only the glint of tears on hollow cheeks.


fairness delayed is a noose around our necks

choking out the last gasps of faith.


we claw at the walls of our own making,

desperate to right the wrongs that devour us.


still, our hands bleed, and our voices crack

in a world that's lost its way.

Comments

  1. Anonymous6/09/2025

    This is a battle cry!

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  2. Anonymous6/09/2025

    yes!!!
    louder 📣

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  3. venice6/09/2025

    the lines are so powerful, very timely; a truth that needs to be shouted from the rooftops.

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  4. intense emotions

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  5. queen never cry6/09/2025

    I always admire your precise word choices.

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  6. hoooo this one's a tough read.
    but an essential one for sure.

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  7. Anonymous6/09/2025

    jeeeezzzz, it's that realization that we're complicit, that the system is built by us, even as it devours us.

    a truly haunting reflection. 🙃

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  8. hirono6/09/2025

    incredible, heartbreaking work.

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  9. "Fairness delayed is a noose around our necks choking out the last gasps of faith."

    Exactly! It's not just an inconvenience; it's soul-destroying.

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  10. You always manage to bring the vastness of a problem down to an individual's pain so powerfully.

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  11. You don't just describe inequity; you make the reader feel it.

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  12. Anonymous6/09/2025

    unforgettable 😭

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  13. Anonymous6/09/2025

    this is an eye opener, we became too complicit people

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  14. Estefaaano_writes, I don't know how else to say it but... thank you. Every single line of this poem felt like it was pulled directly from my own life, from my own experiences with a system that just doesn't care.
    It's not just poetry, it's my truth. You've given voice to the very real, brutal pain of living through this kind of injustice. Thank you, truly, for seeing it and for sharing it.

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  15. Anonymous6/09/2025

    The repeated 'I envy you' in your last poem, 'I.NV.U', felt like a personal longing. This poem, 'Inequity,' feels like a collective sigh of despair and frustration.

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  16. This. All of this. I felt every single line. I grew up in a place where we were constantly told to be grateful for scraps while others feasted. Your poem gave voice to that gnawing feeling in my stomach, the one that said, "This isn't fair." Thank you for putting words to this unspoken truth.

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  17. oldsoulyoungeyes6/09/2025

    Your poem took me straight back to my childhood. The whispers in the neighborhood, the way some families had so much and others had so little, and how those differences dictated everything. You articulated the subtle ways society reinforces these divides. It’s a powerful piece, and honestly, a bit of a relief to read someone else express exactly what I've felt for so long.

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  18. Thank you for this powerful poem.
    I've always struggled to explain the systemic issues that create and perpetuate poverty, but your words cut right to the core of it.

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  19. My parents worked themselves to the bone, hoping for a better life for us, but the system just wasn't built for them. Your poem brought tears to my eyes because it perfectly describes the crushing reality of watching people you love give everything and still come up short, not because of a lack of effort, but because the odds are stacked against them.

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  20. Anonymous6/09/2025

    For years, I've bitten my tongue, tried to "fit in," and downplayed the injustices I've witnessed or experienced. "Inequity" hit me like a lightning bolt. It's given me the courage to speak up, to acknowledge my own story, and to advocate for others.
    Thanks for lighting that fire estefaaano_writes!

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  21. Anonymous6/09/2025

    All I can say is, I am deeply moved.

    I read "Inequity" and had to just sit with it for a long time. It evoked so many emotions, so much understanding of experiences I've seen others go through and even felt myself. It’s rare to find a piece of writing that connects so deeply with the human condition and makes you truly feel the weight of its message. Kudos! 👏🏻

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  22. Anonymous6/09/2025

    📣📣📣

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  23. Anonymous6/09/2025

    "in a world that's lost its way."
    yep, that's what this is

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