unbound

 



Unbound 

estefaaano_writes 


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I held your absence like water in cupped hands,

atoms that once belonged to us both 

now seeping through fingers.

                                            I let them go.


By shallow pools where your words gather,

I stand naked in my observance,

refusing the intoxication of memory's scent.

What is odorless cannot haunt.


My voice,

      A tremor that breaks against mountain walls,

      returns to me across oceans

      without your echo.


Is it freedom I taste, or just destruction?


Temples reduced to sand, forests to stumps.

But see how green persists,

       how it climbs through wreckage.


The heart is not heavy, it is vast.


I contain what you never saw:

deserts and plains,

worker and aristocrat,

                         slave and master;

multitudes you never touched.


Your embrace was merely a station

in the endless procession of becoming.

Death laughs at our goodbyes.

What dies gives birth.


If you search for me, look beneath your soles,

in dirt where I've become something elemental.

You may not recognize what I mean now,

but I will filter through your blood anyway,

                                       a different nourishment.


I wait, but not forever.

The universe flows on, indifferent

to the moment we severed, 

                         

               untranslatable and untamed.


šŸƒ

Comments

  1. Anonymous4/25/2025

    I can’t get over the line about becoming "something elemental."
    It’s such a powerful message that even when we feel lost, we’re still part of something bigger.

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  2. following anonymously4/25/2025

    I love how you tackled the idea that death can lead to new life. It’s a comforting thought, especially when we’re grieving.

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  3. Anonymous4/25/2025

    made me reflect on my own relationships and how they shape who I am

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  4. gelato4/25/2025

    It’s so easy to get lost in the past, but your poem encourages me to find strength in moving forward.

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  5. close your eyes4/25/2025

    "What is odorless cannot haunt." That's such a clever way of thinking about moving on from memories.

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  6. Anonymous4/25/2025

    yet another, a masterpiece that leaves you with a lot to think about.

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  7. Anonymous4/25/2025

    The poem grapples beautifully with the paradox of loss and transformation.

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  8. Anonymous4/25/2025

    "absence like water in cupped hands" is so visceral and sad

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    1. Anonymous4/25/2025

      I think anyone who's experienced a significant loss can connect with that feeling of something precious slipping away.

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  9. Anonymous4/25/2025

    "'Unbound' – the title itself feels significant in the context of the poem. It speaks to a breaking free, but also perhaps a sense of being untethered.

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  10. Monique4/25/2025

    unexpectedly irresistible.

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  11. Anonymous4/25/2025

    The idea of becoming something elemental and filtering through blood is a unique and powerful way to think about legacy and the enduring impact of relationships, even after they end.

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  12. Anonymous4/25/2025

    This one makes me think of a specific relationship I went through. The feeling of your voice returning without an echo is so spot on. It's like the space where that person used to be is just...empty. šŸ«—

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  13. Anonymous4/25/2025

    I like the way the poem flows.
    It feels very organic.

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  14. There's a raw honesty in this poem, especially in the question, "Is it freedom I taste, or just destruction?" It acknowledges the complexity of moving on and the potential for both liberation and pain. I'll read it again.

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  15. pragmatic4/25/2025

    It's interesting how the poem acknowledges the end of something without dwelling solely on the sadness.

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  16. Anonymous4/25/2025

    The line about death laughing at goodbyes feels very matter-of-fact, almost a realistic acceptance of life's cycles!

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  17. Anonymous4/25/2025

    I love this writer so much! Grabe, genius!!!
    I love how the movement from focusing on the "YOU" to the vastness of the "I" is really powerful and super inspiring. 🩷

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  18. Anonymous4/25/2025

    I like that the poem doesn't offer easy answers.

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    1. Anonymous4/25/2025

      yes! it leaves room for interpretation and personal reflection.

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  19. Anonymous4/25/2025

    The idea that an embrace is just a (station) is a perspective I haven't considered before.

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  20. Reading this aloud, there's a definite rhythm to the language. This piece is well-written.
    The line breaks and varying sentence lengths contribute to the overall impact. I will never get tired of reading your workd estefaaano_writes!

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  21. atonement4/25/2025

    there's vulnerability in the speaker's voice that makes the poem feel very authentic.

    sharing such raw emotions takes courage.

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  22. This one touches on the indifference of the universe to personal moments.

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  23. Anonymous4/25/2025

    the symbolism here is quite rich, very impressive.

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  24. Anonymous4/25/2025

    when you're going through something intense, it can feel jarring how the world just keeps turning

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  25. rooftop4/25/2025

    you can sense the speaker moving through different stages of grief

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  26. alabaster4/25/2025

    I love that despite the poetic language, there's a directness to some of the lines.
    Like "I let them go" and "Death laughs at our goodbyes," that cuts through and just feels very impactful.

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  27. who's you?4/25/2025

    the poem reveals a lot about the speaker's internal state, but it also makes you think about the person who is now absent.

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  28. The final word, "UNTAMED," is very interesting. After all the reflection on loss and transformation, it ends with a sense of wildness and perhaps a refusal to be fully defined by the past relationship

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  29. Anonymous4/25/2025

    It doesn't feel overly dramatic, but the emotions conveyed are deep and resonant.

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  30. MORE PLEASE!

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  31. Harley4/25/2025

    This piece doesn't necessarily offer a neat resolution, but there's a sense of closure in the speaker's acceptance of the separation and their focus on their own journey forward.

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  32. I appreciate that the poem avoids being overly sentimental. It confronts the pain of loss in a raw and honest way without resorting to clichƩs.

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  33. Anonymous4/26/2025

    šŸƒ

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  34. wow! that feeling of your voice returning without the familiar echo of the other person is so poignant

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  35. emo_tic4/26/2025

    you can literally trace a clear emotional arc in the poem.

    moving from the immediate feeling of loss to a more reflective and ultimately forward-looking perspective.

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  36. Anonymous4/26/2025

    Hmph. Another breakup poem. Still, that 'odorless cannot haunt' line is kinda clever. Wish I'd thought of that during my last disaster.

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  37. uhm-confused4/26/2025

    So, the person turned into dirt?

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  38. Anonymous4/26/2025

    We return to the earth, we nourish what comes after.

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  39. Anonymous4/26/2025

    gotta admit, (Death laughs at our goodbyes) has a certain dark humor to it. Truth.

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  40. Anonymous4/26/2025

    hmm so, you're saying you're going to haunt them from inside their own bloodstream?
    Passive-aggressive much?
    I dig it.

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  41. Anonymous4/26/2025

    stirs the mind.
    literally

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  42. Anonymous4/26/2025

    šŸ‘šŸ»

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  43. I have to read it 3 times, to understand it.
    but I think I have to do it again hahaha

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  44. Anonymous4/26/2025

    šŸ’—šŸ’—šŸ’—

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  45. Anonymous4/26/2025

    serene

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  46. RELEASE STORMS AND SUNSETS THE ARCHIVES NOW!!!!!!
    please šŸ™šŸ»šŸ„ŗ

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