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 I wandered lost in thought,

And on the cliffs of Batanes.

In crepuscular rays you stood,

The one my reveries had brought.


Our glances locked, igniting fast,

Hearts were beating wild,

We talked of poems and the past,


As midnight reconciled

The dreamer and the man in me

As winds through Batanes grasslands roamed,

As I fell deep into this new stage

I once thought this wasn’t made for me


That I was better off just one

But you showed me differently patiently

Like the rising, setting sun


That vespertine you asked me the question

Holds now like a spark set to flame…


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  1. Anonymous5/01/2025

    BRAVE

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  2. Anonymous5/01/2025

    The transition from the dream to reality in such a stunning location is just chef's kiss. I love you estefaaano_writes!

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  3. Anonymous5/01/2025

    I love how the poem acknowledges the initial hesitation about romance and then the patient unfolding of something real. It's so relatable! Sumusobra kana 😂

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  4. Anonymous5/01/2025

    Batanes! What an incredible setting for a romantic encounter. The cliffs and the sunset just amplify the whole dreamy vibe of the poem. BEAUTIFUL

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  5. The rugged beauty of that place must have made the encounter even more memorable

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  6. The way you connect the dream from the first poem to this real-life encounter is seamless.

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