WALL
by: estefaaano_writes
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A fortress, a boundary.
A canvas, a blank slate.
A divider, a unifier.
It holds up the sky, and hides the darkness.
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I have dissolved into these bricks,
become the mortar between certainties.
Each day, lives brush against my surfaceā
leaving invisible fingerprints of their stories
while I collect sounds of footsteps
that were never meant to leave marks.
A businessman trails his cologne of desperation,
briefcase swinging like a pendulum
counting down moments he'll never recover.
I absorb his sighs into my concrete pores,
holding space for dreams too heavy
for his pockets to carry.
A young mother presses her palm flat against my face,
steadying herself while her child
scatters autumn leaves in spiral dances.
I hold her weight, her pause, her silent prayerā
the way walls hold up both
ceilings and expectations.
They don't see me watching
through calcium eyes,
how I collect their scattered fragmentsā
a museum of passing moments,
curator of unlived possibilities,
keeper of roads untaken.
Time flows through me like groundwater,
wearing smooth channels through my being
until I'm more absence than presence,
more memory than matter,
more question than answerā
a monument to everything we choose to ignore.
Between heartbeats of the city,
I've learned to read the blank pages
in everyone's story,
to taste the salt of unshed tears
in their sideways glances,
to hear the whispers they tell themselves
when they think no one is listening.
In this liminal space between
here and elsewhere,
I've learned that walls don't divideā
they gather, they witness, they remember,
becoming mirrors for those who dare to look,
becoming windows for those who dare to see through.
And sometimes, in the violet hour
when shadows stretch like truth,
I feel myself becoming human again
in all these collected pieces of passing lives,
a thousand untold stories crystallizing
into the sediment of my beingā
both boundary and threshold,
both ending and beginning,
both silence and song.
The wall becomes a silent witness to our joys, sorrows, and the myriad moments that define our lives.
ReplyDeletesudden drop
ReplyDeleteinteresting theme you have estefaaano
ReplyDeletethis is so unique!
ReplyDeleteand deep
this is a testament to your ability to infuse inanimate objects with human qualities, creating a web full of emotions and experiences.
ReplyDeletevery thought provoking, I love it.
You've given the wall a soul. It's like you can almost feel the weight of human history in its bricks. Good job!
ReplyDeleteWow! This is very moving.
ReplyDeleteIt made me think about the silent stories that surround us every day. š„ŗ
Your use of language is beautiful.
ReplyDeletegrabe! I'll never looked at a wall the same way again. This piece has literally changed my perspective.
ReplyDeleteI don't regret waiting for new posts. Your words really brought THE WALL to life. The way you've given it a voice and a soul is amazing. It's like you've peeled back the layers of the wall to reveal its hidden depths.
ReplyDeleteCan't stop thinking about it. šš»
Hey estefaaano_writes!
ReplyDeleteI followed you since "dead star" and I've always been blown away by your ability to find beauty in the mundane.
The wall, a seemingly simple object, becomes a symbol of deep human experience under your pen.
This poem is a testament to your talent as a poet.
W O W
ReplyDeletethe way you've imbued the wall with such depth of feeling is truly impressive.
waiting for more of this!
excited for the whole collection!
This made me think about the walls in my own life, both physical and metaphorical. It's a very powerful piece.
ReplyDeletewow!
ReplyDeletegrabe naman ang philosophical depth, very thought-provoking. šš»šš»šš»
hi poetry!
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