low tide reflections

 



low tide reflections 

by: estefaaano_writes 


"As the tide recedes, we discover the treasures hidden beneath"


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Retreating waves,

 Revealing fragments of what was:

Smooth-edged glass.


Once sharp, 

Now softened.


This quiet stretch of sand,

I trace the outlines of growth,


Where each shell is a lesson learned,

Each footprint a step forward.


The tide will return, 

Bringing new possibilities to shore.

Comments

  1. Anonymous9/21/2024

    I appreciate the way you've managed to capture such a complex idea in so few words, as always estefaaano!!! ā¤ļø

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  2. Anonymous9/21/2024

    I could almost feel the gentle breeze and the warmth of the sun on my skin. It's a beautiful portrayal of finding solace in nature.

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  3. Anonymous9/21/2024

    The imagery in this piece is so vivid...I could almost see the ocean and feel the sand between my toes.
    Is this how Batangas feels like?

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  4. Anonymous9/21/2024

    Your poems offer hope and encouragement to those seeking to find themselves. Amazing work estefaaano_writes. ā¤ļø

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  5. Anonymous9/21/2024

    I love the way you use nature to reflect your inner state steph. It's a really creative way to express yourself. To more spontaneous gala, and inspirations haha.

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  6. Anonymous9/21/2024

    šŸŒŠ

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  7. Anonymous9/22/2024

    I can relate to the feeling of 'tracing the outlines of growth' after a difficult time. šŸššŸŒŠ

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  8. Anonymous9/22/2024

    ooohhhhhh, the way you describe the "smooth-edged glass" and the "shells" is so evocative. It's like a snapshot of a moment in time. šŸš

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  9. Anonymous9/22/2024

    the tide will always turn, and new possibilities are always waiting.

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  10. Anonymous9/22/2024

    may the tides and time be on our favor. šŸ«¶šŸ»

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  11. Anonymous9/22/2024

    Shared this to my friends!
    such a "must-read" piece.
    Thanks for the experience estefaaano_writes!!

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  12. Anonymous9/23/2024

    thanks for this

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  13. Anonymous9/24/2024

    this is so serene

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  14. Anonymous9/26/2024

    #certifiedmustreadpiece

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